Suggestion: writing

Discussion in 'Closed Beta' started by Mouse, Sep 25, 2018.

  1. Mouse

    Mouse New Agent

    At first, during the alpha, I didn't pay it much mind, bc it's the alpha. But as I work through the closed beta, I keep running into one thing that is slapping me in the face and breaking the immersion for me.

    The ui, gameplay, mechanics, and everything is exactly what I wanted from this game. But when it comes to the actual writing of the missions, and particularly the characters in said missions. I feel like they sound just a tiny bit flat. If a touch more was put into giving the individual characters more depth and personality, even just improving the delivery of the current writing, the immersion could be taken to a whole new level.
    Again, from a technical and gameplay perspective I love everything about the game. but this keeps bugging me.

    Maybe it's just me, I just want to add my own little feedback.

    -mouse
     
  2. zaelong

    zaelong Moderator

    are you only refering to the missions? or is the academy also included in this feedback?
    because the missions right now, probably wont make it to the real game, and are more like placeholders, for testing the tools we got right now.

    knowing the devs, the actual missions will have much more depth than what youre seeing right now
     
  3. Mouse

    Mouse New Agent

    the missions have plenty of depth, I'm referring specifically to the characters in the missions needing more depth. I just feel they could have a bit more dimension.
     

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